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Peeling potatoes is hard when the novelty of your rarely-seen older brother with exciting stories is only around for a few more days.
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Panel 1 [Ezra steps up to his mother, hugging her with one arm while laying a hand while Lizzie springs up in front of them both. His mother is smiling slightly, but also looking a bit upset.]
EZRA:
What can I do?
MA:
Table, please.
LIZZIE:
I'll help!!
Panel 2 [Ezra walking towards the table with a slight smile as Lizzie gets up to follow him, relinquishing her potatoes. Her mother calls her back to the hearth]
MA:
Ah ah. I need you over here. That potato's half peeled.
Panel 3 [Lizzie sulks back over to her potato peeling stool]
Panel 4 [Same shot only now she’s sat down and gloomily peeling potatoes again]
Panel 5 [Ezra laughs as he reaches for plates in a cupboard and Lizzie's voice comes off camera]
LIZZIE:
I don't think the soup needs potatoes, Ma.
Panel 6,7,8 [A small series of panels showing close ups of Ezra setting the table, of his soup being ladled into a bowl, and of sliced bread on the table]
EZRA:
What can I do?
MA:
Table, please.
LIZZIE:
I'll help!!
Panel 2 [Ezra walking towards the table with a slight smile as Lizzie gets up to follow him, relinquishing her potatoes. Her mother calls her back to the hearth]
MA:
Ah ah. I need you over here. That potato's half peeled.
Panel 3 [Lizzie sulks back over to her potato peeling stool]
Panel 4 [Same shot only now she’s sat down and gloomily peeling potatoes again]
Panel 5 [Ezra laughs as he reaches for plates in a cupboard and Lizzie's voice comes off camera]
LIZZIE:
I don't think the soup needs potatoes, Ma.
Panel 6,7,8 [A small series of panels showing close ups of Ezra setting the table, of his soup being ladled into a bowl, and of sliced bread on the table]
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