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WHAT’S IN THE CUP. Alas I’ll have to leave the answer on a cliffhanger til next month’s update.
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Panel 1 [Lawrence is bracing his palms against the railing, wincing and looking wretched]
Panel 2 [Same shot but a longer panel showing Lawrence promptly vomiting over the side of the ship as Ezra approaches with a tankard]
Panel 3 [Lawrence in the foreground, looking weary and sick still as Ezra leans on the railing beside him.]
EZRA:
Y’look like hell.
LAWRENCE:
I think I’ve cast up more accounts today than ever in my life.
Panel 4 [Ezra holds out the tankard to a suspicious Lawrence]
EZRA:
Mm, that’ll happen. Here, drink this.
LAWRENCE:
What is it?
EZRA:
A tonic. It'll cure that seasickness. Put’cha right.
Panel 5 [Shot over Lawrence's shoulder as he looks at Ezra’s who's shrugging with a grin.]
LAWRENCE:
Laudanum?
EZRA:
Iunno nothin’ ‘bout that. It’s wine and some other stuff from the doctor’s kit. Don’t worry, I read the little numbers on the vial.
Panel 6 [Lawrence takes the tankard from Ezra as Josué walks up beside them]
LAWRENCE:
Or ether, then, perhaps.
EZRA:
Sure.
Panel 2 [Same shot but a longer panel showing Lawrence promptly vomiting over the side of the ship as Ezra approaches with a tankard]
Panel 3 [Lawrence in the foreground, looking weary and sick still as Ezra leans on the railing beside him.]
EZRA:
Y’look like hell.
LAWRENCE:
I think I’ve cast up more accounts today than ever in my life.
Panel 4 [Ezra holds out the tankard to a suspicious Lawrence]
EZRA:
Mm, that’ll happen. Here, drink this.
LAWRENCE:
What is it?
EZRA:
A tonic. It'll cure that seasickness. Put’cha right.
Panel 5 [Shot over Lawrence's shoulder as he looks at Ezra’s who's shrugging with a grin.]
LAWRENCE:
Laudanum?
EZRA:
Iunno nothin’ ‘bout that. It’s wine and some other stuff from the doctor’s kit. Don’t worry, I read the little numbers on the vial.
Panel 6 [Lawrence takes the tankard from Ezra as Josué walks up beside them]
LAWRENCE:
Or ether, then, perhaps.
EZRA:
Sure.
Aaaaaa!!! Been waiting for an update, finally checked back in! I love Addy and Barzillai’s relationship so far, all your dialogue is just…. so good. Everything about this comic is so cool, I can’t wait for the next update 🙂
Woo, thank you very much!
god, the way you made Lawrence’s groaning speech turn into vomit squigglies is frickin genius.
Haha, thank you! It felt like it got the point across better than my trying to come up with a vomit onomatopoeia.