Little update, but better than it's been the past few months at least!
Panel 1 [Barzillai and Adelaide walk past the seawall, churches, trees, and mountains in the distance.]
ADELAIDE:
And I’m glad to be here, especially now that we’re in this beautiful place. I don’t think I’ve ever been anywhere so lovely.
Panel 2 [The pair of them wander down to the beach. Adelaide looks over her shoulder at Barzillai.]
ADELAIDE:
Pity it’s only for a short time.
Panel 3 [Shot of Barzillai, looking a bit fatigued]
BARZILLAI:
There’s a reason I didn’t let the others disembark. Faial is a siren. Many would find it a good place to make a home rather than face down more years at sea.
Panel 4 [Adelaide pauses, laughing and kneeling down in the sand, pulling Barzillai’s arm to join her.]
ADELAIDE:
Come, watch the sunset with me. The sea looks lovelier when you view it from land.
Panel 5 [Barzillai caves with a smile, sitting heavily next to her and laying the bag of letters beside him].






